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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. k3pR
Dear Valentia I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. My name is Roza, who encountered an accident on the itersection of smith street and flood street on the last Friday. I am writing in to thanks you for helping me on that day. It was a bad day for me, but fortunately, you was one who helped me a lot with giving first aid before the ambulance arrived. Since, I awoke, in the hospital I was thinking to write a mercy letter to you. My doctor told me that how much blood I can lost if you were not there. I can not appreciate you in my words because, you are the only person by which I was able to continue to see the World. I really want to see you and your family at our home for a dinner. Please, feel free to write me for the evening that, when you are free to come to us. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Kind Regards Roza
Dear
Valentia


I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. My name is
Roza
, who encountered an accident on the
itersection
of smith street and flood street on the last Friday. I am writing in
to thanks
you for helping me on that day.

It was a
bad
day for me,
but
fortunately
, you
was
one who
helped
me a lot with giving
first
aid
before
the ambulance arrived. Since, I awoke, in

the
hospital I was thinking to write a mercy letter to you. My doctor
told
me that how much blood I can
lost
if you were not there. I can not appreciate you in my words
because
, you are the
only
person by which I was able to continue to
see
the World.

I
really
want to
see
you and your family at our home for a dinner.
Please
, feel free to write me for

the
evening that, when you are free to
come
to us.

I look forward to hearing from you as
soon
as possible.

Kind Regards

Roza
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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