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Dear Mike, How is it going buddy? I haven't seen you for about 2 years. I'm glad to hear that you have finished your high school. I know that it is a turning point in your life, but I think it's better to search for a job. Firstly, you won't enjoy going to college, because you will have to waste a lot of time studying and you need money to be independent first then you can apply for a college. It's important to have practical experience in some fields to be aware of your needs. Secondly, having a job makes you collect money and beside that you deal with different kinds of people. You also can practice English during working and that is a perfect chance to improve your language. Finally, I know you have interests in marketing and design, so I suggest that you apply for jobs that require dealing with food products and fashion. You can start your career early. You only will need to attend some courses to start your work. If I were you, I will prepare my C. V. As soon as possible. I hope my advice can help you. If you have any questions. Please don't hesitate to contact me. Love, Hussein

Dear Mike,

How is it going buddy? I haven't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 you for about 2 years. I'm glad to hear that you have finished your high school. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 know that it is a turning point in your life, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it's better to search for a job.

Firstly
, you won't enjoy going to college, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 waste This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 time studying and you need money to be independent first
 then you can You can apply for a job or welfare, but you apply to a college. Revise: "apply to a college".apply to a college
apply for a college
. It's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to have practical experience in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fields to be aware of your needs.

Secondly
, having a job This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 you collect money and beside that you deal with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 kinds of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. You also
 can practice English during working and that is
 a perfect chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 your language.

Finally
, I know you have interests in marketing and design, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I suggest that you apply for jobs that require dealing with food products and fashion. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 your career early. You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 will need to attend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 courses to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 your work. If I were you, I will prepare my C. V. As This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

I hope my advice can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you. If you have any questions. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 don't hesitate to contact me.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
,

Hussein