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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take r35J
Dear Mr. Shetty, I am writing this letter to explain the issue about the sound pollution emerging from our flat for which you have raised the complaint. . Hope you are familiar with the dance show that is going to be held next month in sony television. My son is ver passionate about the dance since child hood and wanted to participate in the show. The wining of show is very imperative to him and struggling hard to to acheive the same. Hence, dance reharsal sessions happening at my home with loud music. I an extremely sorry for the issue that you are facing on behalf of us. I hope you undetstand our situation and forgive for the same. As the noise pollution interfering with your daily living activities, we have decided to continue the dance reharsal sessions at nearby studio. I assume that the action we are going to implement solves your problem. I repent for the inconvinience caused to you on behalf of us. I request you to forgive for the mistake we have commited. I assure that th same will not be repeated in upcoming days. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Chittimella Venkateshwari
Dear Mr. Shetty,

I am writing this letter to
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explain
the issue about the sound pollution emerging from our flat for which you have raised the complaint.
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.


Hope you are familiar with the
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dance
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show
that is
going to
be held
next
month in
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sony
television. My son is
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ver
passionate about the
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dance
since child hood and wanted to participate in the
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show
. The wining of
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show
is
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very
imperative to him and struggling
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hard
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to to
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acheive
the same.
Hence
,
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dance
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reharsal
sessions happening at my home with loud music.

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I
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an
extremely
sorry for the issue that you are facing on behalf of us. I hope you
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undetstand
our situation and forgive for the same.

As the noise pollution interfering with your daily living activities, we have decided to continue the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dance
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reharsal
sessions at nearby studio. I assume that the action we are going to implement solves your problem.

I repent for the
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inconvinience
caused to you on behalf of us.
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I
request you to forgive for the mistake we have
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commited
.
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I
assure that
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th
same will not
be repeated
in upcoming days.

Thanking you.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Chittimella
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Venkateshwari

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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  American English
9 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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