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Hello everyone, my name is Nguyen Le Lac Tien. I’m currently a student in 11th grade at Binh Son High School. Up to now, I have accompanied LOS English Club for over 1 year and some offline meetings which had taken place before I became an official member. Along with my consuming passion for English, I made numerous attempts to observe how an English club operated when being a Vice President last year. I was indeed filled with gratitude to have an opportunity to work with the former President - Dang Anh Duong and the former Head of Human Resource - Phan Thi Minh Tue. Thanks to their help, I did not encounter any predicaments when setting out. This year, I’m delightfully honored to be the next President of our LOS English Club. After a duration with LOS, I realize there are still a few trivial problems happening to members, especially those who find online working complicated. With all my conscience, I ensure that you will gradually adapt to the new working environment. Our Core Team is willing to make your queries concerning this field be addressed as much as we can do.
Hello everyone, my name is Nguyen Le Lac
Tien
. I’m
currently
a student in 11th grade at
Binh
Son High School. Up to
now
, I have accompanied LOS English Club for over 1 year and
some
offline meetings which had taken place
before
I became an official member. Along with my consuming passion for English, I made numerous attempts to observe how an English club operated when being a Vice President last year. I was
indeed
filled with gratitude to have an opportunity to work with the former President
-
Dang
Anh
Duong
and the former Head of Human Resource
-
Phan
Thi
Minh
Tue. Thanks to their
help
, I did not encounter any predicaments when setting out. This year, I’m
delightfully
honored to be the
next
President of our LOS English Club. After a duration with LOS, I realize there are
still
a few trivial problems happening to members,
especially
those who find online working complicated. With all my conscience, I ensure that you will
gradually
adapt to the new working environment. Our Core Team is willing to
make
your queries concerning this field
be addressed
as much as we can do.

IELTS letter presentation about the previous

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
193 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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