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a person's personality is reflected by their clothes

a person's personality is reflected by their clothes Ky0P3
Hello everyone, my name is My, im group 2 and now im gonna tell you the unit 2 with topic sentence "a person's personality is reflected by their clothes". This kind of clothes are very simple in color, just only one color and without any texture or other color exept some buttons or zippers. Moreover each colors represent the different character and the feeling of people. So now I'm going to tell you some colors and show you what does your favorite colors say about your personality. To begin with the first color, it's white color, it reflects purity. Those who love white color appreciate cleanliness and orderliness. At work, you are a disciplined person. You are honest, always trusting people and because you trust others too much, you are sometimes judged as subjective and naive. Furthermore, because it symbolizes innocence, white is always used as the color of the bride in the wedding. But white clothes can also make you less sad. In addition, Blue is the color of peace. If you love blue, your personality must be gentle and slow. You are a reliable person, so your friends always come to you to open up. Beside in career, people who love the blue color often have the ability to flexibly face difficulties, not faltering to find a suitable solution. Furthermore, we will come to the color that when the girls were young, they really loved it, which is pink. Pink is the color that represents love, femininity, those who love this color are very mischievous and funny person, you are an emotional, innocent person. For example, pink is associated with the princess sleeping beauty on disney, because of her dress's color represents her innocent and gullible. Next, when you think of Christmas, the first color you think you can make is green. It's the color of the pine tree, the typical tree for the Christmas season. and as you know that Christmas season is the season of family reunion and warmth and more than that green is the color of natural and enviroment so that now you know the reason why people who clean up the environment or carry out environmental projects often wear green shirts. Therefore, if you like this color, you are the person who love this natural green color have a tolerant personality and love to help others. In conclusion, we can say each color is a separate symbol for each personality of each person who likes it. And that's my representation, thank for listening.
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this natural
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have a tolerant
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likes it. And that's my representation, thank for listening.
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IELTS letter a person's personality is reflected by their clothes

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420 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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