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Dear Sam, Thank you in advance in taking care of my house I really appreciate for your kind nature. As you know this pandemic has made us all so tired just to stay in house with lot of restriction on travel and many more. After long waiting now they ease the travel restrictions am a lot enthusiastic to travel to Georgia and to have bit refreshment. Here are the things which I need to tell you are it’s been a long year that you did not come to our home a lot have changed. The entrance of the house is along the car parking; besides you can see the stair case which goes straight. this is one side of house other side of house is under renovation. Just keep a eye on the workers as they are working. If they need anything try to arrange. take care of my plants water it daily twice. Not only them there are trees in my backyard water them too. you can see a cute cat feed it twice a day and keep some water. If it poo, please clean it as it smells rigorous. I remember your gift don’t worry for sure i owe to bring it. Last but least please feel free to contact me via hone +971568877154 or email arjun. shravan7@gmail. com if any emergencies. Yours faithfully
Dear Sam,

Thank you in advance in taking care of my
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house
I
really
appreciate for your kind nature.

As you know this pandemic has made us all
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so
tired
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just
to stay in
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house
with
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lot of
restriction on travel and
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many
more. After long waiting
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now
they
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ease
the travel restrictions

am a lot enthusiastic to travel to Georgia and to have
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bit
refreshment.

Here are the things which I need to
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tell
you are it’s been a long year that you did not
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come
to our home a lot have
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changed
. The entrance of the
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house
is along the car parking;
besides
you can
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see
the stair case which goes straight.
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this
is one side of
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house
other side of
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house
is under renovation.
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Just
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keep
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
eye on the workers as they are working.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
they need anything try to arrange.
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take
care of my plants water it daily twice. Not
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only
them there are trees in my backyard water them too.
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you
can
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see
a cute cat feed it twice a day and
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keep
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some
water. If
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it poo
,
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please
clean it as it smells rigorous. I remember your gift don’t
The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean "worry about"?
worry for
sure
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i
owe to bring it.

Last
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but
least
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please
feel free to contact me via hone +971568877154 or email
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arjun
.
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shravan7@gmail
.
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com
if any emergencies.

Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter agreed to look after your house

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6 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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