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You visited a restaurant yesterday, but you were not satisfied with the service.

You visited a restaurant yesterday, but you were not satisfied with the service. NW3AW
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the terrible service and meal at your restaurant, "Kluberg". I am a regular customer of your restaurant. However, last night it was a big disappointment. Firstly, I was totally frustrated when I discovered a piece of hair in the bowl of soup. That killed my appetite and spirit. Can you imagine my disappointment when I have to stay hungry? Though I complained about my food to the waitress, she did not mind me and instead told me to complain to the manager. Furthermore, when I had to look for a manager myself. However, I did not notice that the floor has been freshly mopped. I you’ve suffered a slip on a wet floor. My back hurts after a fall down accident and I have bodily bruising. Besides, I want to express my complete dissatisfaction with the behavior of the manager. When I asked him why there were no warning signs or cones and who was liable for my slipping on wet floor with no wet floor sign, he acted indecently and even shouted at me. As you can imagine, I am extremely upset. I trust that you will seriously consider my complaint and give me a reasonable explanation. In addition, you must repay the money $300, including the amount I have spent on the medical services. I also want you to take the necessary action against the manager who denied paying attention to my complaints. Please, look into how your restaurant is running and serving its customers. I look forward to receiving to your prompt reply. Yours faithfully, Tori Walker
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the terrible service and meal at your restaurant,
"
Kluberg
"
. I am a regular customer of your restaurant.
However
, last night it was a
big
disappointment.

Firstly
, I was
totally
frustrated when I discovered a piece of hair in the bowl of soup. That killed my appetite and spirit. Can you imagine my disappointment when I
have to
stay hungry? Though I complained about my food to the waitress, she did not mind me and
instead
told
me to complain to the manager.

Furthermore
, when I had to look for a manager myself.
However
, I did not notice that the
floor
has been
freshly
mopped. I you’ve suffered a slip on a wet
floor
. My back hurts after a fall down accident and I have
bodily
bruising.

Besides
, I want to express my complete dissatisfaction with the behavior of the manager. When I asked him why there were no warning signs or cones and who was liable for my slipping on wet
floor
with no wet
floor
sign
, he acted
indecently
and even shouted at me.

As you can imagine, I am
extremely
upset. I trust that you will
seriously
consider my complaint and give me a reasonable explanation.
In addition
, you
must
repay the money $300, including the amount I have spent on the medical services. I
also
want you to take the necessary action against the manager who denied paying attention to my complaints.
Please
, look into how your restaurant is running and serving its customers. I look forward to receiving to your prompt reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tori Walker
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IELTS letter You visited a restaurant yesterday, but you were not satisfied with the service.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
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