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letter of application for embassy

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I am Mark Lester Marte a law-abiding citizen of the Philippines, my wife Aileen Dulay-Marte who will start her journey as an international student in Canada this coming Fall Semester of 2022 in Kwantlen Polytechnic University (KPU) taking up Post-Baccalaureate of Technical Management and Services. As her husband whom I spent one third of my life with her and together with my two-year-old adorable daughter (Margareth Alessia Marte) would like to apply for Open Work Permit and Temporary Resident Visa relative to wife’ application for Student Visa in Canada in order to support, provide assistance and be at her side during this endeavor as an international student. I am well-aware that the duration of our visa will only cover the time that my wife has in her study permit, and so I would like to assure your office that we will be leaving your country as soon as my wife completed her program taken at KPU as mandated by Canadian government. We considered our family as a “tight-knit family” as we have never been away for more than a month even, thou I have received a numerous job offers from other countries previously such as Thailand, Japan and Singapore which eventually I have turned down. I always requested that the visa I should receive is for family status since I firmly believe that work should not be a reason to be separated to your family. This also is my wife first time to travel internationally which I knew will have impact to her due to the adjustments she needed to make which as husband should be at her side during this time. Lastly, considering my daughter is still a toddler we knew that the mother welfare and nurture should be present for her development. My wife and I first met as a colleague in Denso Philippines (formerly known as Phil. Auto Components Inc. ) last January 2009. At first, there are no sparks between us as we only interact to each other as co-worker and nothing more. As the time progress and got to know more each other we eventually started to go out and eventually became an official couple last May 28, 2010. After dating for six years, we have tied the knot last May 28, 2016 which is also the same date as we officially became a couple. As a married couple we were blessed last October 2019 with a beautiful daughter. I graduated with a degree of Bachelor of Science in Mechanical Engineer last 2007 from Mapua Institute of Technology. After graduation, I took and passed the licensure examination as a Registered Mechanical Engineer. Currently I am working at Fluor Daniel Inc. Philippines as Mechanical Engineer since October 2010 as a mid-senior level position. I also worked previously at PHPC Co. Ltd. Inc. from June 2008 to August 2008 and Denso Philippines from January 2009 to October 2010.
I am Mark Lester
Marte
a law-abiding citizen of the Philippines, my
wife
Aileen
Dulay-Marte
who will
start
her journey as an international student in Canada this coming Fall Semester of 2022 in
Kwantlen
Polytechnic University (KPU) taking up Post-Baccalaureate of Technical Management and Services. As her husband whom I spent one third of my life with her and together with my two-year-
old
adorable daughter (
Margareth
Alessia
Marte
) would like to apply for Open Work Permit and Temporary Resident Visa relative to
wife’
application for Student Visa in Canada in order to support, provide assistance and be at her side during this endeavor as an international student. I am well-aware that the duration of our visa will
only
cover the
time
that my
wife
has in her study permit, and
so
I would like to assure your office that we will be leaving your country as
soon
as my
wife
completed her program taken at KPU as mandated by Canadian
government
.

We considered our
family
as a “tight-knit
family”
as we have never been away for more than a month even, thou I have received a numerous job offers from other countries previously such as Thailand, Japan and Singapore which
eventually
I have turned down. I always requested that the visa I should receive is for
family
status since I
firmly
believe that work should not be a reason to
be separated
to your
family
. This
also
is my
wife
first
time
to travel
internationally
which I knew will have impact to her due to the adjustments she needed to
make
which as husband should be at her side during this
time
.
Lastly
, considering my daughter is
still
a toddler we knew that the mother welfare and nurture should be present for her development.

My
wife
and I
first
met as a colleague in
Denso
Philippines (
formerly
known as Phil. Auto Components Inc.
)
last January 2009. At
first
, there are no sparks between us as we
only
interact to each other as co-worker and nothing more. As the
time
progress and
got
to know more each other we
eventually
started
to go out and
eventually
became an official couple last May 28, 2010. After dating for six years, we have tied the knot last May 28,
2016
which is
also
the same date as we
officially
became a couple.
As
a married couple we
were blessed
last October 2019 with a
beautiful
daughter.

I graduated with a degree of Bachelor of Science in Mechanical Engineer last 2007 from
Mapua
Institute of Technology. After graduation, I took and passed the licensure examination as a Registered Mechanical Engineer.
Currently
I am working at
Fluor
Daniel Inc. Philippines as Mechanical Engineer since October 2010 as a mid-senior level position. I
also
worked previously at
PHPC
Co. Ltd. Inc. from June 2008 to August 2008 and
Denso
Philippines from January 2009 to October 2010.
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IELTS letter letter of application for embassy

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
481 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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