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part time work in museum 1. why u want the job 2. skills 3. available time

part time work in museum 1. why u want the job 2. skills 3. available time gxVRa

Dear Sir or Madam, This letter is regarding my interest in your part time job at the museum which i learned about in the local newspaper. I want this job, because it will be a bestow to me and an excellent opportunity to learn about art, history of my country. After all, museum is the place with the huge collection of arts and artifacts from an era which is almost forgotten, additionally, it is a perfect opportunity for community involvement. As per my skills and qualifications, I have a easy going personality with excellent communication skills which will be a great add-on to interact with visitors, furthermore, I have worked as a hotel receptionist, consequently, handled dealings with people to get along well knowing their mentalities. Thus, considering all my enthusiasm, skill and experience I think i can render the position and improve it with my abilities. I am available from 5 pm till the closing time of the place. I hope you could spare sometime to meet me to discuss my further candidacy. Yours Sincerely,

Dear Sir or Madam,

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part time
 job at the museum which Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 learned about in the local newspaper.

I want this job, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it will be After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'bestow' is correct. If 'bestow' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a bestow
 to me and an excellent opportunity to learn about art, history of my country. After all
, museum is the place with the huge collection of arts and artifacts from an era which is almost forgotten, additionally
, it is a perfect opportunity for community involvement.

As per my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and qualifications, I have Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 easy going personality with excellent communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 which will be a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
-on to interact with visitors, furthermore
, I have worked as a hotel receptionist, consequently
, handled dealings with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 along well knowing their mentalities.

Thus
, considering all my enthusiasm, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 and experience I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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i
 can render the position and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 it with my abilities. I am available from 5 pm till the closing time of the place. I hope you could spare sometime to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 me to discuss my further
 candidacy.

Yours Sincerely
, 