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Our Time, My world, Our future.

Our Time, My world, Our future. xadjb
hello from the 21st century. In this letter i will write about life in the 21st century for any intruiged people from the future who wants to hear what it's like. I am a fifteen year old student at Bollebygd school. And I am currently going through my third year in high school. I am not really liking it that much though, i got bored of school so long ago i can't even remember the last time i had some fun here. Except of course with my friends at recess. The ninth year sure did step up in difficulty in many subjects now that we are preparing to leave for our next studies in the gymnasiums. But it could be worse, i'm not really complaining that much since other people in less privileged country's aren't even allowed to go to school. When i'm not in school i mostly hang out with my friends. I've got two seperate friend groups that i switch between. One a girl group and the other a boy group. But I usually stick to my boys, we have lots of fun together. Beacause we all just turned fifteen we all just recently took our drivings license for AM (mopeds) and each one of us have our own mopeds and we like to ride around in the woods and roads of bollebygd. We go really fast and try to do tricks like weelies. I expect that you reading this won't even have axcess to gasoline burning mopeds, supermotos, cars and all of that, since my generation will be one of the last to use it as the experts say. And to that I just say that i am very sorry for you guys beacause you're really missing out.
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hello
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will write about life in the 21st century for any
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intruiged
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from the future who wants to hear what it's like. I am a fifteen year
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student at
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Bollebygd
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. And I am
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liking it that much though,
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can't even remember the last time
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friend groups that
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One a girl group and the other a boy group.
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stick to my boys, we have lots of fun together.
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we all
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turned fifteen we all
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recently took our drivings license for AM (mopeds) and each one of us have our
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we like to ride around in the woods and roads of
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, cars and all of that, since my generation will be one of the last to
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it as the experts say. And to that I
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IELTS letter Our Time, My world, Our future.

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291 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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