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You would like to stay at a friend’s house for a short time as you are visiting his/her city and don’t want to stay in a hotel. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

You would like to stay at a friend’s house for a short time as you are visiting his/her city and don’t want to stay in a hotel. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: lXDkK
Dear Mark, How are you? I have something special to tell you. I'm taking a business trip in your town. Can I stay in your house? As you know in your town is one hotel and this hotel haven't free rooms. I have nowhere to stay in your town. And I haven't seen you for a long time. As you know I very generous and I prepare some surprises for you and your family. I would be glad to hear from you soon. Warm regards, Engene
Dear Mark, How are you? I have something special to
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you. I'm taking a business trip in your town. Can I stay in your
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house
? As you know in your town is one hotel and this hotel haven't free rooms. I have nowhere to stay in your town. And I haven't
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seen
you for a long time. As you know I
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very
generous and I prepare
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some
surprises for you and your family. I would be glad to hear from you
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soon
. Warm regards,
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Engene
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IELTS letter You would like to stay at a friend’s house for a short time as you are visiting his/her city and don’t want to stay in a hotel. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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