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You have recently moved to a new city. Write a letter to your friend from your old neighborhood describing life and the feelings of the changes. And invite him/her to your place.

You have recently moved to a new city. Write a letter to your friend from your old neighborhood describing life and the feelings of the changes. And invite him/her to your place. LLPB8
Dear Jeck. Hi! How are you? How is it going? I'm writing for invite you to my new house. We recently moved to a big city. Our home in the centre of this city. There are 10 000 000 population of this city. The people of this city are very wonderful and kind. The ways are extremely clean. People follow environmental rules. Therefore, there are plenty trees in there. There are a lot of high buildings. Our home is big and beautiful. As well as, the rooms are spacious and bright. Also, there are large gardens. Pets can be fed. All the people in this city are happy. I liked this city. I am glad in there. We are inviting to you our new house. I will show to you my new neighbors. We will around the city. I hope you will come. I would be glad if you come. Lots of love Michael
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Jeck
.

Hi! How are you? How is it going? I'm writing for invite you to my new
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house
. We recently
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moved
to a
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big
city. Our home in the
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centre
of this city. There are 10 000 000 population of this city. The
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people
of this city are
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very
wonderful and kind. The ways are
The extreme adjective for clean is "spotless".
extremely clean
.
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People
follow environmental
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rules
.
Therefore
, there are
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plenty
trees in there. There are
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a lot of
high buildings. Our home is
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big
and
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beautiful
.
As well
as, the rooms are spacious and bright.
Also
, there are large gardens. Pets can
be fed
. All the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in this city are happy. I liked this city. I am glad in there. We are inviting to you our new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
to you my new neighbors. We will around the city. I hope you will
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come
. I would be glad if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
.

Lots of
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love


Michael
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a new city. Write a letter to your friend from your old neighborhood describing life and the feelings of the changes. And invite him/her to your place.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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