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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant LLaJp
Dear Sir or Madam, A few days ago, I and my friends went to your restaurant to celebrate one of my friends 25th birthday, and I must admit that we were very satisfied with the food and service we were provided. I am writing to acknowledge what you did for us. First of all, I must thank you for making the great arrangements for the birthday party on such short notice since almost 35 people attended it. In fact, I was initially suspicious about how your staff were going to arrange all the seats and tables in the tight space of your restaurant, but they proved me wrong by placing them perfectly. The ambient was great and we were surprised by the birthday music. Besides, the quality of the food, especially the choice of the fresh fruit salad as a dessert, was excellent. We also enjoyed our main course very much. On top of that, all of your staff members were very friendly as they all treated us like some royalties. I also appreciate your effort to decorate the restaurant with some beautiful lighting scheme on that occasion. All in all, you helped organize a great birthday party, and I hope you will continue doing so in future. Yours faithfully, Kyle Brian
Dear Sir or Madam,

A few days ago, I and my friends went to your restaurant to celebrate one of my friends 25th birthday, and I
must
admit that we were
very
satisfied with the food and service we
were provided
. I am writing to acknowledge what you did for us.

First of all
, I
must
thank you for making the great arrangements for the birthday party on such short notice since almost 35
people
attended it. In fact, I was
initially
suspicious about how your staff were going to arrange all the seats and tables in the tight space of your restaurant,
but
they proved me
wrong
by placing them
perfectly
. The ambient was
great and
we
were surprised
by the birthday music.

Besides
, the quality of the food,
especially
the choice of the fresh fruit salad as a dessert, was excellent. We
also
enjoyed our main course
very
much.
On top of that
, all of your staff members were
very
friendly as they all treated us like
some
royalties. I
also
appreciate your effort to decorate the restaurant with
some
beautiful
lighting scheme on that occasion.

All in all, you
helped
organize a great birthday party, and I hope you will continue doing
so
in future
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kyle Brian
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IELTS letter You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant

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7 paragraphs
211 words
6.5
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