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complain and suggestion for customer service PLaQX
Customer Service Manager Subang Jaya Medical center No. 1, Jalan SS12/1A, Ss 12, 47500 Subang Jaya, Selangor Oct17, 2021 To Whom It May Concern, I am writing today to complain of the the way Subang Jaya Medical Center are not Accommodating staff, patient, and caregiver. i was told by the nurse that i was suppose to order anything via foodpanda or grabfood. because they cant go down and collect it for me which is understandable. they also tell me that they are not allowed to order anything. i was also informed that the front counter are not accepting any food to hold on for a moment while i go down. this is bonkers. what am i supposed to eat? i am most annoyed that no food was offered for me but there's only food for my one year old child. do i share with my child? do i go down by my self and leave my child alone in the room? the nurse said if anything happen they will not be responsible. i also cant take my child outside because they are putting some water line on my child hand. do i go down with my child with that thing? wait in front the lobby when my child are mask-less, passing with random people not knowing if they are sick(covid+) or not. and exposing my child with unknown risk. i believe this is a nosocomial infection. I trust this is not the way Subang jaya medical center wishes to conduct business with valued customers. I have been admitted to other hospital like SMC and i have never encountered such treatment before. my suggestion is to put a rack like in the super market when they not allowed us to bring bags. the rack then are numbered where the grabF/Fpanda put our food and tell which number they leave them in. it also same with their company policies "contact-less delivery". I would welcome the opportunity to discuss matters further and to learn of how you propose to prevent a similar situation from recurring. I look forward to hearing from you. i am also want to keep thing private. Yours faithfully, Sent with ProtonMail Secure Email.
Customer Service Manager

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Subang
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Jaya
Medical center

No. 1,
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Jalan
SS12/1A,

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Ss
12, 47500

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Subang
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Jaya
, Selangor

Oct17, 2021

To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing
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today
to complain of
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the the
way
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Subang
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Jaya
Medical Center are not Accommodating staff, patient, and caregiver.

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i
was
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told
by the nurse that
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i
was
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suppose
to order anything via
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foodpanda
or
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grabfood
.
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because
they
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cant
go
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down
and collect it for me which is understandable.
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they
also
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tell
me that they are not
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allowed
to order anything.
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i
was
also
informed that the front counter are not accepting any
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food
to hold on for a moment while
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i
go
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down
.
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this
is bonkers.
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what
am
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i
supposed to eat?

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i
am most annoyed that no
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food
was offered
for me
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but
there's
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only
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food
for my one year
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old
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child
.
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do
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i
share with my
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child
?
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do
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i
go
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down
by my self and
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leave
my
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child
alone in the room?
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the
nurse said if anything happen they will not be responsible.
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i
also
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cant
take my
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child
outside
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because
they are putting
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some
water line on my
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child
hand.
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do
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i
go
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down
with my
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child
with that thing?
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wait
in front the lobby when my
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child
are mask-less, passing with random
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people
not knowing if they are sick(
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
+) or not.
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and
exposing my
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child
with unknown
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risk
.
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i
believe this is a
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nosocomial
infection.

I trust this is not the way
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Subang
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jaya
medical center wishes to conduct business with valued customers. I have
been admitted
to other hospital like SMC and
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i
have never encountered such treatment
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before
.
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my
suggestion is to put a rack like in the super market when they not
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allowed
us to bring bags.
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the
rack then
are numbered
where the
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grabF
/
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Fpanda
put our
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food
and
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tell
which number they
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leave
them in.
It seems that a verb is missing.
it
also
same with their
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company
policies
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
contact-less delivery
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"
. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss matters
further
and to learn of how you propose to
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prevent
a similar situation from recurring. I look forward to hearing from you.
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i
am
also
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want
to
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keep
thing private.

Yours
faithfully
,

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with ProtonMail Secure Email.
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