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you and some of the students recently organised a fashion show at your school to raise money for charity write an email to your friend about fashion show in you

you and some of the students recently organised a fashion show at your school to raise money for charity write an email to your friend about fashion show in you mXaLA

Dear Hawsa, How are you? Sorry I haven't written to you for so long because I was busy with an organisation. Anyways, I thought I'd drop you a line to tell you what happened so far. Me and my friends organised a fashion show raised for charity to help kids with lung cancer. As you know, I love helping people in need and seeing an opportunity to help someone coming my way, I won't love to miss it. My class had so much fun decorating the school playground. We added some colorful lights and pretty chairs. The tickets were cheap, it was a dollar per child and two dollars per adults. I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw many people actually came. Everyone had fun, eating, chatting and ofcourse watching the stunning models. It was great! That's all for now. Write soon and tell me about the lemon charity held in your country, everyone is talking about. Best wishes, Nada

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Hawsa
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because
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organisation
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thought
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tell
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so
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When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.I
Me
 and my friends Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
 a fashion This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 raised for charity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 kids with lung cancer. As you know, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 helping This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in need and seeing an opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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coming
 my way, I won't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to miss it.

My This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much fun decorating the school playground. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 colorful lights and pretty chairs. The tickets were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
, it was a dollar per child and two dollars per adults.

I couldn't believe my eyes when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 actually came. Everyone had fun, eating, chatting and Possible spelling mistake found.of course
ofcourse
 watching the stunning models. It was great!

That's all for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Write This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me about the lemon charity held in your country, everyone is talking about.

Best wishes, Possible spelling mistake found.NASANADAdaDadaNACANadia
Nada