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our neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

our neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take e557G
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Jones, I am writing in response to the complaint about the noise from my flat and would like to explain about the noise and apologise about it. My wife and I brought a brand new sound system recently and got it installed few days back. We weren't aware of the frequency of the sound produced by it. We had it tested yestarday to check it overall sounf clarity in different settings and amplitudes last night. We Sincerely apologise for the disturbance caused by the noise genereated during the testing phase. We will keep in mind the noise levels to bare minimum so that they won't be any inconvenice to you. Sorry for the trouble caused to you. We planned to install sound proof doors and windows in our house along with maintaining normal sound level in the system. I request for forgiveness. Please, accept this chocolate box as a token of my appreciatation for not taking any legal action. Yours sincerely, Srujan Aditya
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Jones,

I am writing in response to the complaint about the
noise
from my flat and would like to
explain
about the
noise
and
apologise
about it.

My wife and I brought a brand new
sound
system recently and
got
it installed few days back. We weren't aware of the frequency of the
sound
produced by it. We had it
tested
yestarday
to
check
it
overall
sounf
clarity in
different
settings and amplitudes last night.

We
Sincerely
apologise
for the disturbance caused by the
noise
genereated
during the testing phase.
We
will
keep
in mind the
noise
levels to bare minimum
so
that they won't be any
inconvenice
to you. Sorry for the trouble caused to you.

We planned to install
sound
proof doors and windows in our
house
along with maintaining normal
sound
level in the system.

I request for forgiveness.
Please
, accept this chocolate box as a token of my
appreciatation
for not taking any legal action.

Yours
sincerely
,

Srujan
Aditya
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IELTS letter our neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
166 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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