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ou registered for a service that blocks unwanted/unsolicited telephone calls. This service is offered by your phone operator. Yet you receive unwanted calls. Write a letter to Telecom Department. In your letter • introduce yourself • give details why you are annoyed • say what you want the department to do for you

ou registered for a service that blocks unwanted/unsolicited telephone calls. This service is offered by your phone operator. Yet you receive unwanted calls. Write a letter to Telecom Department. In your letter • introduce yourself • give details why you are annoyed • say what you want the department to do for you 9waBX
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to show my utter displeasure regrading the complaint which I raised to block unwanted calls as the request still has not been resolved. My name is Nikita and I have registered for the services to block unsolicited calls on my number last week. My complaint ID is YH76544. Despite my several requests, I am continuously getting spam calls on my number. Let me explain the situation. I am a doctor and have to answer each and every unknown call for the sake of urgency but the numbers of call has been increased day by day which is being wasted my time as they people ring again and again despite being I have shown no interest in their products. Therefore, I would request you to resolve it by end of the day else I will have to raise the complaint to the chief executive of the telecom department. I solicit your cooperation and wait for your revert. My coordinate is (776) 7665558 and my email ID is xyz@gmail. com. You can reach me anytime between 10am to 1 PM. Yours faithfully, Nikita.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
my utter displeasure regrading the complaint which I raised to block unwanted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
calls
as the request
still
has not
been resolved
.

My name is Nikita and I have registered for the services to block unsolicited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
calls
on my number last week. My complaint ID is YH76544. Despite my several requests, I am
continuously
getting spam
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
calls
on my number.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
the situation. I am a doctor and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
answer each and every unknown
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
call
for the sake of urgency
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the numbers of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
call
has
been increased
day by day which is
being wasted
my time as they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
ring again and again despite being I have shown no interest in their products.

Therefore
, I would request you to resolve it by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the day else I will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
raise the complaint to the chief executive of the telecom department.

I solicit your cooperation and wait for your revert. My coordinate is (776) 7665558 and my email ID is
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xyz@gmail
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
. You can reach me anytime between 10am to 1 PM.

Yours
faithfully
, Nikita.
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IELTS letter ou registered for a service that blocks unwanted/unsolicited telephone calls. This service is offered by your phone operator. Yet you receive unwanted calls. Write a letter to Telecom Department. In your letter • introduce yourself • give details why you are annoyed • say what you want the department to do for you

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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