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a letter to my fr axcd fafasa

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dear…, I am writing to apologize you about our meeting next week. I should have told you soon but I have finished my English course yesterday. No sooner did I complete the class than I send a letter to you to notice that I obligate to cancel our appointment. My English class will prepare everything for short-term trip to Ha Long Bay on next Saturday coinciding with the day of our arrangement, consequently, I couldn’t meet you. I’m sorry about that but we could modify to a distinct day. How do you think? Should you busy, we can choose a superb day of the next month. To be honest, we haven’t met for a long time so I actually want to talk with you. Hope to hear you soon. Remember the place of our arrangement, at HEC coffee! Love,
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dear
…,

I am writing to apologize you about our meeting
next
week. I should have
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told
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
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but
I have finished my English course yesterday. No sooner did I complete the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
than I
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send
a letter to you to notice that I obligate to cancel our appointment.

My English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
will prepare everything for short-term trip to Ha Long Bay on
next
Saturday coinciding with the day of our arrangement,
consequently
, I couldn’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you. I’m sorry about that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
we could modify to a distinct day. How do you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
? Should you busy, we can choose a superb day of the
next
month. To be honest, we haven’t met for a long time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I actually want to talk with you.

Hope to hear you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Remember the place of our arrangement, at HEC coffee!

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,
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IELTS letter a letter to my fr axcd fafasa

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
139 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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