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Daily life email to friend

Daily life email to friend RR5PP

Dear Dat, My name is Hoa - your classmate. How is your day? How is your family? In this time of covid epidemic, is your place all stable? In my current place, the epidemic is still very complicated. I am writing this letter today to tell you about my day during this time. I usually wake up at 7 o'clock but I don't get up at 8am then I brush my teeth and wash my face and then I start to have breakfast at 8: 30. It's epidemic time, so after that I usually stay at home and watch TV or play on my phone or play games with my sister. At about 10 am, my mother and I prepared lunch. My family doesn't need to go to the market because my mother has stored a lot of food in the refrigerator. After helping my mother, I have lunch at 11 o'clock. Then I wash the dishes and take a nap. At 2pm, I take the time to review my homework or do my homework. If there is an online class that day, I will join. At about 5 pm, I have dinner with my family. After that, I had a short chat with family members in the living room. then around 7pm i do my homework until i finish it i will rest. I usually go to bed very late. I usually sleep at 11pm or 12pm. I think I need to change this late sleep habit because it is not good for health. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Hoa

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but
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get
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start
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watch
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family
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a lot of
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time
 to review my homework or do my homework. If there is an online This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
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join
. At about 5 pm, I have dinner with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
. After that, I had a short chat with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
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then
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 do my homework until Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 will rest. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlycustomarilyroutinelymostlysometimesgenerally
usually
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very
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usually
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I
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think
 I need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 this late sleep habit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for health.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best wishes,

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