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Motivation Letter for preliminary course in Computer Science

Motivation Letter for preliminary course in Computer Science gWxrg
I will explain why I would like to enter this Preliminary course for Computer Science. The purpose of applying for this course is to improve Mathematics levels, basic computer skills and practical English skills, especially speaking and writing skills, to lay the foundation for learning computer science. In short, by studying in this course, I would like to prepare for the main study in bachelor of Computer Science starting in September 2022 at Eötvös Loránd University. And, In the future, I would like to be a computer programmer and be involved in the development of services that enrich people's lives. Computers have become an indispensable tool in our human life. It supports or enriches people's lives. That's why I decided to study computer science because I wanted to use computers to help and improve people's lives. Since I decided so, I've learned about the mathematics, programming, and computers needed to study computer science at university by myself. I took an SAT exam to qualify my mathematics levels, learned the basics of programming at a programming learning site, and watched videos explaining how computers work. In the SAT exam, the math score was 630 out of 800. At the programming learning site, I learned HTML / CSS, JavaScript and PHP. According to these things, you can see that I have the power to work towards my goals. My goal is now to become a programmer and engage in creating services that support people's lives. For that, I have studied by myself, but as it is now, I do have not enough knowledge. That's why I decided to study computer science properly at university. And I wanted to study abroad, not at a university in Japan, 　because I would like to learn in a more diverse environment. I also applied for this preparatory course because I thought the foundations were the most important in everything and wanted to lay a solid foundation in computer science before entering university. I have faced myself a lot and made an effort towards my goals. For example, when I was a junior high school student, there was a system in which only one person could study abroad in Canada by selecting from the school. I really wanted to participate in it, so I improved my English, did the tasks, and I was finally chosen as the only one to go to Canada. Also, when I was a high school student, I studied hard and endeavoured at club activities and school events, and I was able to get very high grades in graduation. In this way, I have the power to try my hardest patiently and diligently toward my goals. Even if I enrol in this preparatory course, its strengths will be able to be utilized. Next, I will tell you why I chose the preparation course at ELTE. I chose ELTE's preparation course because I would like to study Computer Science at ELTE after the preparation course. ELTE is located in the beautiful city of Budapest, the capital of Hungary, has closely related to Japan, and accepts many international students, so I thought that I could "learn in a diverse environment". Moreover, learning Hungarian is a pleasure for me, as becoming a multilingual speaker is one of my dreams. Another reason is that ELTE is one of the best educational institutions in Hungary. I would be happy if I could study on ELTE's urban yet full of natural campus. Finally, if I enter this Preliminary course, I will do my best with my strengths. Then, I will build a firm basis for computer science. And after completing this Preliminary course, I will enter the bachelor's program in Computer Science and study harder to become my goal of becoming a computer programmer.
I will
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explain
why I would like to enter this Preliminary
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course
for Computer
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Science
. The purpose of applying for this
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course
is to
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improve
Mathematics levels, basic computer
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skills
and practical English
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skills
,
especially
speaking and writing
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skills
, to lay the foundation for
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learning
computer
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science
. In short, by studying in this
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course
, I would like to prepare for the main
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study
in bachelor of Computer
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Science
starting in September 2022 at Eötvös
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Loránd
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University
. And, In the future, I would like to be a computer programmer and
be involved
in the development of services that enrich
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people's
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lives
.

Computers have become an indispensable tool in our human life. It supports or enriches
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people's
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lives
. That's why I decided to
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study
computer
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science
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because
I
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wanted
to
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use
computers to
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help
and
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improve
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people's
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lives
. Since I decided
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so
, I've learned about the mathematics,
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programming
, and computers needed to
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study
computer
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science
at
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university
by myself. I took an SAT exam to qualify my mathematics levels, learned the basics of
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programming
at a
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programming
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learning
site, and
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watched
videos explaining how computers work. In the SAT exam, the math score was 630 out of 800. At the
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programming
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learning
site, I learned HTML / CSS, JavaScript and PHP. According to these things, you can
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see
that I have the power to work towards my goals.

My
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goal
is
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now
to become a programmer and engage in creating services that support
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people's
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lives
. For that, I have studied by myself,
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but
as it is
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now
, I do have not
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enough
knowledge. That's why I decided to
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study
computer
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science
properly
at
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university
. And I
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wanted
to
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study
abroad, not at a
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university
in Japan,
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because
I would like to learn in a more diverse environment. I
also
applied for this preparatory
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course
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because
I
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thought
the foundations were the most
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important
in everything and
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wanted
to lay a solid foundation in computer
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science
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before
entering university.

I have faced myself a lot and made an effort towards my
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goals
.
For example
, when I was a junior high
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school
student, there was a system in which
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only
one person could
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study
abroad in Canada by selecting from the
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school
. I
really
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wanted
to participate in it,
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so
I
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improved
my English, did the tasks, and I was
finally
chosen as the
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only
one to go to Canada.
Also
, when I was a high
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school
student, I studied
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hard
and
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endeavoured
at club activities and
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school
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events
, and I was able to
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get
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very
high grades in graduation. In this way, I have the power to try my hardest
patiently
and
diligently
toward my
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goals
. Even if I enrol in this preparatory
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course
, its strengths will be able to
be utilized
.

Next
, I will
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tell
you why I chose the preparation
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course
at
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ELTE
. I chose
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ELTE
's preparation
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course
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because
I would like to
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study
Computer
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Science
at
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ELTE
after the preparation
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course
.
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ELTE
is located
in the
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beautiful
city of Budapest, the capital of Hungary, has
closely
related to Japan, and accepts
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many
international students,
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so
I
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thought
that I could
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learn in a diverse environment
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.
Moreover
,
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learning
Hungarian is a pleasure for me, as becoming a multilingual speaker is one of my dreams. Another reason is that
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ELTE
is one of the best educational institutions in Hungary. I would be happy if I could
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study
on
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ELTE
's urban
yet
full of natural campus.

Finally
, if I enter this Preliminary
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course
, I will do my best with my strengths. Then, I will build a firm basis for computer
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science
. And after completing this Preliminary
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course
, I will enter the bachelor's program in Computer
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Science
and
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study
harder to become my
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goal
of becoming a computer programmer.
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IELTS letter Motivation Letter for preliminary course in Computer Science

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
625 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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