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LE MINH HIEU Dear, Hoa It is nice to hear from you, it was interesting to hear about your daily routine in Hoa Binh. I am writing to tell you about my daily routine in Hanoi. every day I usually get up at 9: 00 a. m except Thursday because I have a class at 7 a. m so I usually get up at 6: 00 am. I have a bath then wash my face, brush my teeth and then get ready for an online class. Then I have breakfast with my parents and my sister until 6: 40 a. m. I usually preview the lesson before the online class to make the lesson more effective, so I read the preview from 6: 50 a. m until 6: 55 a. m. and then I start my online class at 7: 00 a. m and I study until 9: 10 a. m. After the class I often go to the park near my house to relax my mind with my dog named Snow, she is a Samoyed and she likes jogging with me in the park. At noon my dad and my sister are in the company so me and my mom are always cooking together. In my house we often cook diverse dishes at lunch like bun cha or pho or we can have a traditional lunch. In the afternoon I have a class from 1: 25 p. m until 5: 05 p. m it’s the heaviest class of the week. After the class I often go to shower to relax and then get ready for dinner. At dinner my mom always cooks traditional Vietnamese dishes, she is a good cooker. I have dinner at 7: 30 p. m and then I wash the dishes. After dinner I go straight to my room and do homework from 8: 00 p. m to 9: 30 p. m and then I often surf the internet for about 1 hour. I usually go to bed at 11: 00 p. m, that’s the end of my day. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes Hieu
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. Then I have breakfast with my parents and my sister until 6: 40 a. m. I
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I read the preview from 6: 50 a. m until 6: 55 a. m. and then I
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at 7: 00 a. m and I study until 9: 10 a. m. After the
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go to the park near my
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to relax my mind with my dog named Snow, she is a
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cook diverse dishes at lunch like bun
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from 1: 25 p. m until 5: 05 p. m it’s the heaviest
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of the week. After the
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go to shower to relax and then
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my mom always cooks traditional Vietnamese dishes, she is a
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at 7: 30 p. m and then I wash the dishes. After
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surf the internet for about 1 hour. I
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Best wishes

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