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ou have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with reference to the statement that I have received last week. I am an employee at Texas instruments and have an account in your for 20 years and I am 43 years old and a premium account holder. Firstly, Let me explain my situation. The statement that I received consists of a huge list of items that I never purchased, and the exact date was 21 February, however, on that particular day, I was completely busy at my office till mid night. In addition to that, the list consists of luxury items like iPhone and Bose earphones. It will be appreciated if you go through the list, which I will be senting it to you via mail. Even though there are some dues left for the card, I would like you to reimburse the amount after deducting the dues. Please give this matter immediate attention. Yours Faithfully, John Total Words: 153
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with reference to the statement that I have received last week.

I am an employee at
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Texas instruments
and have an account in your for 20
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years and
I am 43 years
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old
and a premium account holder.

Firstly
,
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Let
me
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explain
my situation. The statement that I received consists of a huge list of items that I never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
, and the exact date was 21 February,
however
, on that particular day, I was completely busy at my office till mid night.
In addition
to that, the list consists of luxury items like iPhone and Bose earphones.

It will
be appreciated
if you go through the list, which I will be
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senting
it to you via mail.
Even though
there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
dues
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
for the card, I would like you to reimburse the amount after deducting the dues.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
give this matter immediate attention.

Yours
Faithfully
,

John

Total Words: 153

IELTS letter ou have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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  American English
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159 words
6.0
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