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Organising a seminar for your company

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Dear Mrs ChristianI am writing to tell you about training event. I am organising for the afternoon of Wednesday on 9th July. The seminar is on the issue of "how to attract teenagers attention to book". Our company members think about this problem. They search for different ways to make teenagers interested in it. As you know, nowadays young people spend much time for the necessary information and things. You hold many certification and experiment among children and teenagers. I would be grateful if you would be prepared to share some this knowledge and make a presentation during seminar. I suggest that the seminar should last for 1hours. The subject I would like you to discuss about in what ways we can increase young people's love for books. In practical session where people can practice good lifting techniques would be ideal. If you are able to do this, please let me know what resources you would need so that I can provide them for you. I look forward to receiving your reply. Your sincerely, Lucy Dale.
Dear Mrs
ChristianI
am
writing to
tell
you about training
event
. I am
organising
for the afternoon of Wednesday on 9th July. The seminar is on the issue of
"
how to attract
teenagers
attention to book
"
. Our
company
members
think
about this problem. They search for
different
ways to
make
teenagers
interested in it. As you know, nowadays young
people
spend much time for the necessary information and things. You hold
many certification
and experiment among children and
teenagers
. I would be grateful if you would
be prepared
to share
some
this knowledge and
make
a presentation during seminar. I suggest that the seminar should last for 1hours. The subject I would like you to
discuss about in
what ways we can increase young
people
's
love
for books. In practical session where
people
can practice
good
lifting techniques would be ideal. If you are able to do this,
please
let
me know what resources you would need
so
that I can provide them for you. I look forward to receiving your reply.
Your
sincerely
, Lucy Dale.
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IELTS letter Organising a seminar for your company

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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