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One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following - Listening skills - Speaking skills - Vocabulary

One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following - Listening skills - Speaking skills - Vocabulary B0kp
Hello Jay, I hope you and your family are doing well. As you mentioned in your last letter that you are planning to move to Sydney, Australia for further study, I'm writing this letter to give you some suggestions regarding the same. There are certain aspects of migration that you need to consider before making a move, and one of those aspects is language. Australia is an English-speaking country and therefore I think you should prepare yourself accordingly. Here are a few tips to improve your English. The first and most important skill is listening. You'll deal with many people in your daily routine and being unable to understand could be the worst experience. So, you should start listening to English podcasts, songs, or talk shows, and if possible, choose Australian speakers to know more about their tone. Also, watch some movies and series as well. This will not only improve your listening but also your speaking because these two skills are closely related to each other. However, try to talk with others in English to practice as only listening cannot assure fluent speaking. Additionally, new words are also crucial, especially those that are frequently used in the Australian context. To enhance your vocabulary, I'd suggest you watch Australian news channels and especially from Sydney. I hope this will help. If you need any help, feel free to ask. All the very best, Vinay
Hello Jay,

I hope you and your family are doing well. As you mentioned in your last letter that you are planning to
move
to Sydney, Australia for
further
study, I'm writing this letter to give you
some
suggestions regarding the same.

There are certain aspects of migration that you need to consider
before
making a
move
, and one of those aspects is language. Australia is an English-speaking country and
therefore
I
think
you should prepare yourself
accordingly
. Here are a few tips to
improve
your English.

The
first
and most
important
skill
is listening. You'll deal with
many
people
in your daily routine and being unable to understand could be the worst experience.
So
, you should
start
listening to English podcasts, songs, or talk
shows
, and if possible, choose Australian speakers to know more about their tone.
Also
,
watch
some
movies and series
as well
. This will not
only
improve
your listening
but
also
your
speaking
because
these two
skills
are
closely
related to each other.

However
, try to talk with others in English to practice as
only
listening cannot assure fluent speaking.
Additionally
, new words are
also
crucial,
especially
those that are
frequently
used
in the Australian context. To enhance your vocabulary, I'd suggest you
watch
Australian news channels and
especially
from Sydney.

I hope this will
help
. If you need any
help
, feel free to ask.

All the
very
best,

Vinay
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IELTS letter One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following - Listening skills - Speaking skills - Vocabulary

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
233 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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