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One of your penfriends is going to emigrate to Australia in a few months. They want to improve their English before they leave and have asked for your advice. Write a letter to your penfriend and give them advice on how to improve their speaking, listenin v.2

One of your penfriends is going to emigrate to Australia in a few months. They want to improve their English before they leave and have asked for your advice. Write a letter to your penfriend and give them advice on how to improve their speaking, listenin v. 2
Dear John, I' m really excited to hear you are moving to Australia. How has preparations been? In your letter, you asked me for some advice on how to enhance your English Language skills and here are a few points to consider. Speaking is your most valuable asset in an English-Speaking country. The sole language of communication in Australia is English and therefore, it will be important that you raise your standard of spoken English. To do this, I' d suggest you practice everyday. Try talking to everyone in English Language. Also, you should look for native speakers nearby and communicate with them. You may also consider enrolling in a language school. For your listening skills, I will advise you tune to the BBC radio and television programs. I think you should make it a point of duty to listen to their 9: 00 PM news everyday and checkout some other programs they have that may be helpful. In addition, you should also look for other channels on the television and radio that have nice English Language programs. Another aspect of your language skills that you should consider working on, is you vocabulary. It' s important that you show you have a wide range of vocabulary at workplace. It will also help you to understand the people you will come in contact with very well. To advance you vocabulary, I will suggest you use a number of sites. Visit the British Council website. They have some nice materials and tutorials on vocabulary. You will also see links to other resources on vocabulary and they are quite valuable. John, I have to do some other stuff. If you need anything, just drop me some lines. All the best, Alfred.
Dear John,

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really
excited to hear you are moving to Australia. How has preparations been? In your letter, you asked me for
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some
advice on how to enhance your English
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Language
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skills
and here are a few points to consider.

Speaking is your most valuable asset in an English-Speaking country. The sole
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language
of communication in Australia is English and
therefore
, it will be
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important
that you raise your standard of spoken English. To do this,
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I&
#039; d suggest you practice
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everyday
. Try talking to everyone in English
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Language
.
Also
, you should look for native speakers nearby and communicate with them. You may
also
consider enrolling in a
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language
school.

For your listening
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skills
, I will advise you tune to the BBC radio and television programs. I
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think
you should
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make
it a point of duty to listen to their 9: 00 PM news
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
and checkout
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some
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other
programs they have that may be helpful.
In addition
, you should
also
look for
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other
channels on the television and radio that have nice English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Language
programs.

Another aspect of your
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language
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skills
that you should consider working on, is you
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vocabulary
.
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#039; s
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important
that you
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show
you have a wide range of
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vocabulary
at workplace. It will
also
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help
you to understand the
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people
you will
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come
in contact with
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very
well. To advance you
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vocabulary
, I will suggest you
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use
a number of sites. Visit the British Council website. They have
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some
nice materials and tutorials on
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vocabulary
. You will
also
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see
links to
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other
resources on
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vocabulary and
they are quite valuable.

John, I
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have to
do
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some
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other
stuff. If you need anything,
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just
drop me
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some
lines.

All the best,

Alfred.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter One of your penfriends is going to emigrate to Australia in a few months. They want to improve their English before they leave and have asked for your advice. Write a letter to your penfriend and give them advice on how to improve their speaking, listenin v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
288 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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