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One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him/her at the airport on time. v.5

One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him/her at the airport on time. v. 5
Dear Hanson, Hope you are doing well. I have no words to express my elation as finally I can put a face on your words and we can meet each other. Regrettably, I will be late to receive you at the airport and I feel terribly sorry about that. Unfortunately, I am supposed to stay on the campus until 6: 00 pm Monday, the day of your arrival, to turn in an extracurricular project to compensate for an exam I have recently missed. Honestly, I have been up to my eyes during the last two nights and unbelievably I pulled an all-nighter last night to go through the whole material for my geography test next day. In this case, I will be presumably late to pick you up at the airport. I would be grateful if you could wait for a couple of hours and let me drive you to my home. In the meantime, you can browse the books and magazines from the airport lounge and have some snacks and drinks from the canteen. I will be wearing down to a pair of baggy jeans with my white sneakers and a red V-neck shirt and I will be staying by the lost and found section to meet you. Warm wishes, Farshad
Dear Hanson,

Hope you are doing well. I have no words to express my elation as
finally
I can put a face on your
words and
we can
meet
each other.
Regrettably
, I will be late to receive you at the airport and I feel
terribly
sorry about that.

Unfortunately, I
am supposed
to stay on the campus until 6: 00 pm Monday, the day of your arrival, to turn in an extracurricular project to compensate for an exam I have recently missed.
Honestly
, I have been up to my eyes during the last two nights and
unbelievably
I pulled an all-nighter last night to go through the whole material for my geography
test
next
day.

In this case
, I will be presumably late to pick you up at the airport. I would be grateful if you could wait for a couple of hours and
let
me drive you to my home. In the meantime, you can browse the books and magazines from the airport lounge and have
some
snacks and drinks from the canteen.

I will be wearing down to a pair of baggy jeans with my white sneakers and a red V-neck shirt and I will be staying by the lost and found section to
meet
you.

Warm wishes,

Farshad
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him/her at the airport on time. v. 5

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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