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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You haven't seen each other for a long time and was happy to meet him/her. v.2

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You haven't seen each other for a long time and was happy to meet him/her. v. 2
Dear John, Hope you are doing great. Thank you for having me at your house last week and it was really great to meet you after a long. The experience was amazing and I had the time of my life when we hopped to different places during the time. I regret that it is over! I am hoping you would come and stay at my house during your next vacation. As you know I am an ardent football fan and I still cannot get the wonderful memories of that football match that we enjoyed together at the Emirates Stadium out of my head. I still get chills on my spine when I think about it. Remember those tantalizing final ten minutes of the game when Liverpool FC turned it around by scoring two late goals, and then the entire stadium went berserk with joy. I wish I had a video camera to capture those sensational moments! Anyway, would you fancy dropping by at my place on Sunday afternoon? I am having some high school friends over, and if you could come, that would be simply fantastic as the gathering will turn into our high school reunion. Also, I have not seen some of these guys in ages, so I am pretty sure this is going to be one of a kind of experience for all of us. I look forward to seeing you soon. Warm wishes, Sam
Dear John,

Hope you are doing great. Thank you for having me at your
house
last week and it was
really
great to
meet
you after a long. The experience was amazing and I had the time of my life when we hopped to
different
places during the time. I regret that it is over! I am hoping you would
come
and stay at my
house
during your
next
vacation.

As you know I am an ardent football fan and I
still
cannot
get
the wonderful memories of that football match that we enjoyed together at the Emirates Stadium out of my head. I
still
get
chills on my spine when I
think
about it. Remember those tantalizing final ten minutes of the game when Liverpool FC turned it around by scoring two late goals, and then the entire stadium went berserk with joy. I wish I had a video camera to capture those sensational moments!

Anyway, would you fancy dropping by at my place on Sunday afternoon? I am having
some
high school friends over, and if you could
come
, that would be
simply
fantastic as the gathering will turn into our high school reunion.
Also
, I have not
seen
some
of these guys in ages,
so
I am pretty sure this is going to be one of a kind of experience for all of us.

I look forward to seeing you
soon
.

Warm wishes,

Sam
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS letter You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You haven't seen each other for a long time and was happy to meet him/her. v. 2

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  American English
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236 words
6.5
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