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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You haven't seen each other for a long time and was happy to meet him/her. v.1

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You haven't seen each other for a long time and was happy to meet him/her. v. 1
Dear Jonathon, I'm writing to profoundly thank you for a really delightful trip at your place. It was great to see you after a long and to be able to spend some quality time with you and your wife Emily. I am writing to invite you both to visit my house next summer. Now that I'm back home, I keep thinking about how time does fly. Our school days seems just a few months ago! I was delighted to be with you as it reminded me of how close we were during our school days. I should also thank Emily for being such an excellent host. The trip was a memorable one and I particularly enjoyed our visit to the Bonajuma beach where I spent a really pleasant time. The tranquillity and the harmony of the area won my heart. Thank you for taking me there. Perhaps you can come and visit me during the summer vacation. There are plenty of places we can go and my parents would really love to see you. We will have fun and enjoy our time together. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Warm wishes, Alison Cambell
Dear Jonathon,

I'm writing to
profoundly
thank you for a
really
delightful trip at your place. It was great to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you after a long and to be able to spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
quality
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
with you and your wife Emily. I am writing to invite you both to visit my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
next
summer.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
that I'm back home, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
thinking about how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
does
fly
. Our school days seems
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a few months ago! I
was delighted
to be with you as it reminded me of how close we were during our school days. I should
also
thank Emily for being such an excellent host. The trip was a memorable one and I
particularly
enjoyed our visit to the
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Bonajuma
beach where I spent a
really
pleasant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. The
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tranquillity
and the harmony of the area won my heart. Thank you for taking me there.

Perhaps you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and visit me during the summer vacation. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of places we can go and my parents would
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you. We will have fun and enjoy our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
together.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Warm wishes,

Alison
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Cambell
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You haven't seen each other for a long time and was happy to meet him/her. v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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