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On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item.

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. 0DA1

I am writing you in connection with your travel insurance policy which I took to cover our recent holiday trip. Fortunately, the policy covers lost of a valuable item. During my trip I have lost my watch at water park, which was very dear to me as that was a present to me by my late grandfather on the occasion of my graduation and there are lot of sentiments attached to it. I guess the watch has been lost while I was waiting in line to take a water slide named Crazy Loop located on the north side of the water park. I would like you to check with water park authority and see if they have found the item. In case if the same remains lost. I would appericiate it if you can arrange for a same brand watch for me to compensate the loss according to the policy cover. Thanking you in advance for your assistance and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Steve Jobs

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Thanking you in advance for your assistance and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Steve Jobs