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You have recently moved to a different house . Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit YDgd
Dear Anna, Hope this letter finds you in best of spirits. I am so excited to share with you that I finally shifted to my new house in South Delhi. As per our last meeting we were discussing about looking for a new house. Finally, last week we shifted there. This new place is not only, in a posh locality, but also very close to my office. Earlier it used to take almost an hour to reach office, but not anymore. Apart from that, old house was just behind the petrol pump, and all the time there was lot of noise and disturbance. It is built in a duplex area, and we all have separate rooms. I am lucky enough to have a big room and also a swimming pool on the terrace. Moreover, we are a walking distance to the metro station as well as the shopping area. It is quite peaceful here and neighbors are quite friendly and helpful. Next weekend please plan to visit and stay with us for few days. We are planning a small house-warming party also with few close friends on Sunday. You would love to see for yourself the swimming pool and enjoy the party at the rooftop. I will text you the address details. Warm regards, Subina
Dear Anna,

Hope this letter finds you in best of spirits. I am
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so
excited to share with you that I
finally
shifted to my new
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house
in South Delhi.

As per our last meeting we were
Did you mean simply "discussing looking"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discussing about looking
for a new
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house
.
Finally
, last week we shifted there. This new place is not
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only
, in a posh locality,
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but
also
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very
close to my office. Earlier it
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used
to take almost an hour to reach office,
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but
not anymore. Apart from that,
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old
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house
was
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just
behind the petrol pump, and all the time there was
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lot of
noise and disturbance.

It
is built
in a duplex area, and we all have separate rooms. I am lucky
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enough
to have a
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big
room and
also
a swimming pool on the terrace.
Moreover
, we are a walking distance to the metro station
as well
as the shopping area. It is quite peaceful here and neighbors are quite friendly and helpful.

Next
weekend
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please
plan to visit and stay with us for few days. We are planning a
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small
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house
-warming party
also
with few close friends on Sunday. You would
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love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
for yourself the swimming pool and enjoy the party at the rooftop.

I will text you the address
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details
.

Warm regards,

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Subina
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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