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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take d7rK
Dear Mr Brown, I am writing in response to your claims about the unpleasant sound from my flat. The noise has been very unbearable but please kindly understand the need as I am trying to renovate and this would be completed soon In preparation for my wedding, part of my highlighted plans is to renovate my flat to suite my wife needs and make provisions for the children. This exercise has been going on for a week now which has been the major cause of the noise. The use of drilling, cutting and grinding machines has been the source of this noise but their uses are inevitable. I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience this has lead to and I have also Instructed the construction engineer to increase the timeline for the job giving them more time to achieve their tasks. The increase in time means there would be no form of noise from 4 P. M. in the evening till 10 A. M. in the morning where there would be no form of disturbance as I am sure you would be at work at this said time. I look forward to your contribution should you have any more observations and idea to enable the construction go n without disturbing you. Best wishes, Ahmed Ojodu
Dear Mr Brown,

I am writing in response to your claims about the unpleasant sound from my flat. The
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noise
has been
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very
unbearable
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but
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please
kindly understand the need as I am trying to renovate and this would
be completed
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soon


In preparation for my wedding, part of my highlighted plans is to renovate my flat to suite my wife needs and
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make
provisions for the children. This exercise has been going on for a week
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
which has been the major cause of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of drilling, cutting and grinding machines has been the source of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
are inevitable.

I am
deeply
sorry for any inconvenience this has lead to and I have
also
Instructed the construction engineer to increase the timeline for the job giving them more time to achieve their tasks. The increase in time means there would be no form of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
from 4 P. M. in the evening till 10 A. M. in the morning where there would be no form of disturbance as I am sure you would be at work at this said time.

I look forward to your contribution should you have any more observations and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
to enable the construction go n without disturbing you.

Best wishes,

Ahmed
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Ojodu
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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