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You bought a ticket to a music concert. However, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer your ticket to a friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -Tell your friend the details about the concert -Explain why you are unable to go -and explain how your friend can recieve your ticket

You bought a ticket to a music concert. However, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer your ticket to a friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -Tell your friend the details about the concert -Explain why you are unable to go -and explain how your friend can recieve your ticket 3kaN
Dear Martin, I hope you are well. I am writing to let you know about a traditional concert which I've recently booked. Last week, I have been informed about a special music festival In your city, Tehran. Immediately after that, I bought two tickets to spend my weekend there with my wife. This music festival have been held at the national theater located on Persia street since 2015. Next week on 25th of may is dedicated for traditional music group called Homayoun. Unfortunately, My boss set a meeting on this day, so I am expected to speak in front of audience and present our company. Therefore, I could not be able to make it. Enclosed in this letter, I send you both tickets. As I know you have been dealing with traditional insruments from childhood, I supposed that you and your wife would have an enjoyable time there. Hope see you soon my lovely friend Best regards,
Dear Martin,

I hope you are well. I am writing to
let
you know about a traditional concert which I've recently booked.

Last week, I have
been informed
about a special music festival In your city, Tehran. Immediately after that, I
bought
two tickets to spend my weekend there with my wife. This music festival have
been held
at the national theater located on Persia street since 2015.
Next
week on 25th of may
is dedicated
for traditional music group called
Homayoun
.

Unfortunately, My boss set a meeting on this day,
so
I am
expected
to speak in front of audience and present our
company
.
Therefore
, I could not be able to
make
it.

Enclosed in this letter, I
send
you both tickets. As I know you have been dealing with traditional
insruments
from childhood, I supposed that you and your wife would have an enjoyable time there.

Hope
see
you
soon
my lovely friend

Best regards,
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IELTS letter You bought a ticket to a music concert. However, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer your ticket to a friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -Tell your friend the details about the concert -Explain why you are unable to go -and explain how your friend can recieve your ticket

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  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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