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You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant e2Rp
Dear Mr. Nunes, I, Joe Harrin, a member of Brad organization writing this letter to acknowledge you on the last meeting experience which was held on 17th of March. As you are well aware my organization that has been your permanent customer for last ten years and had no complaints but, this last meeting put me in place to write you a complaint letter today. Firstly, as for as the main cause is concerned, the entire team was unsatisfied with your catering arrangements. Due to your insufficient staff, my team members had to invest their crucial time in serving food to themselves and it almost took one hour to get back to our discussion tables. Secondly, I must convey that food quality was not satisfactory as compared to all previous visits. Lastly, however respected regime of our organization is demanding a refund on the last meeting, but I urge you to take a precise look at last meeting arrangements. I want you to find the resolutions so my team will not face it at next month's meeting. Hope you would look into the last meeting issue. Yours sincerely, Jeet Singh
Dear Mr.
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Nunes
,

I, Joe
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Harrin
, a member of Brad organization writing this letter to acknowledge you on the last
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meeting
experience which
was held
on 17th of March. As you are well aware my organization that has been your permanent customer for last ten years and had no complaints
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but
, this last
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meeting
put me in place to write you a complaint letter
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today
.

Firstly
, as for as the main cause
is concerned
, the entire team
was unsatisfied
with your catering arrangements. Due to your insufficient staff, my team members had to invest their crucial time in serving food to themselves and it almost took one hour to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
back to our discussion tables.
Secondly
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
convey that food quality was not satisfactory as compared to all previous visits.

Lastly
,
however
respected regime of our organization is demanding a refund on the last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I urge you to take a precise look at last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
arrangements. I want you to find the resolutions
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
my team will not face it at
next
month's meeting.

Hope you would look into the last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
issue.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Jeet
Singh
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IELTS letter You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

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6.0
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