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Hill way Date: July27, 2021 Jack Brown Highroad Subject: wrong with bringing up schoolboys Dear Sir I am writing to tell you how disappointed I feel about my child’s condition. Hence, she was in ugly situation when I came home from work yesterday. Consequently, I had to express my strong dissatisfaction with this event, thereby, this was not the first time I was amazed to find out being pinched my child by her geography teacher without reasons, even. I am sure you can imagine my worried feelings. And this is against the law, too. I was appalled at the uncontrolled teachers in your school. Furthermore, I thought it was the best school for my daughter. I hope you will deal with this matter will be solved quickly, in a light of the fact that I am reluctant that it will never happen to other parents’ children again. Yours faithfully Lucy.
Hill way

Date: July27, 2021

Jack Brown

Highroad

Subject:
wrong
with bringing up schoolboys

Dear Sir

I am writing to
tell
you how disappointed I feel about my child’s condition.
Hence
, she was in ugly situation when I came home from work yesterday.
Consequently
, I had to express my strong dissatisfaction with this
event
, thereby, this was not the
first
time

I
was amazed
to find out
being pinched
my child by her geography teacher without reasons, even. I am sure you can imagine my worried feelings. And this is against the law, too. I
was appalled
at the uncontrolled teachers in your school.
Furthermore
, I
thought
it was the best school for my daughter.

I hope you will deal with this matter will
be solved
quickly
, in a light of the fact that I am reluctant that it will never happen to other parents’ children again.

Yours
faithfully


Lucy.
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IELTS letter my complaint letter to school director. . .

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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