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Nowadays many people have to work in longer hours.

Nowadays many people have to work in longer hours. 5alnm
In recent years, the advent of technology has significantly influenced to humans’ life. Therefore, to keep pace with cutting-edge inventions, people seem to have to work in longer hour than they did before. There are diverse reasons and effects have been expressed. Apparently, this phenomenon is caused by three main reasons. Firstly, property prices are higher than ever, and without help, it would be impossible for many people to pay a desoit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want to provide a better quality of life for their families. Thirdly, the appearence of new technological innovations requires humans to study and work harder to know how to use and make uses of them in effective way.
In recent years, the advent of technology has
significantly
influenced to humans’ life.
Therefore
, to
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keep
pace with cutting-edge inventions,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
seem to
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have to
work in longer hour than they did
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before
. There are diverse reasons and effects have
been expressed
.

Apparently
, this phenomenon
is caused
by three main reasons.
Firstly
, property prices are higher than ever, and without
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help
, it would be impossible for
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many
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people
to pay a
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desoit
and a mortgage.
Secondly
,
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people
seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want to provide a better quality of life for their families.
Thirdly
, the
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appearence
of new technological innovations requires humans to study and work harder to know how to
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use
and
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make
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uses
of them in effective way.
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IELTS letter Nowadays many people have to work in longer hours.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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