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Noise Issues from neighbour

Noise Issues from neighbour RkEKp

Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I learnt from your previous letter about the disturbance caused due to the noise from our flat. I recently moved in to my new flat and found that the roof and tiles needed some fixing before I could arrange the things and settle in. This is the reason behind a lot of annoying drilling noise from my end. I am really sorry to cause this inconvenience to you and your family and I really regret not informing you upfront. As an action item, I will ask the workers to complete their work between 10 am and 5pm and I promise by the time to you come back from your office, you will have a serene evening to spend with your family. Best regards Ak

Dear John,

I hope you are doing well. I Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 from your previous letter about the disturbance caused due to the noise from our flat.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 in to my new flat and found that the roof and tiles needed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fixing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I could arrange the things and settle in. This is the reason behind This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 annoying drilling noise from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

I am really
 sorry to cause this inconvenience to you and your family and I really
 regret not informing you upfront.

As an action item, I will ask the workers to complete their work between 10 am and 5pm and I promise by the time to you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back from your office, you will have a serene evening to spend with your family.

Best regards

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IELTS letter Noise Issues from neighbour

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

131 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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