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Gavin replay to Giorgio email

Gavin replay to Giorgio email 3AeM5
Hi GiorgioI have Wi-Fi in my room. It is ok, and I don't have problem with it up to now. In campus, I can have prepared meals, but I prefer to myself prepare my meal. There is a shared kitchen in each floor and I can use it. My campus is near the college, so I walk to it about 5 minuets. What about you? What is distance of your room to college? Can you walk to college? Also, we have shared bathroom. I don't like it. Do you have own bathroom? write soon. Givan.
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have Wi-Fi in my room. It is ok, and I don't have problem with it up to
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. In campus, I can have prepared meals,
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I prefer to myself prepare my meal. There is a shared kitchen in each floor and I can
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it. My campus is near the college,
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I walk to it about 5
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. What about you? What is distance of your room to college? Can you walk to college?
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, we have shared bathroom. I don't like it. Do you have
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IELTS letter Gavin replay to Giorgio email

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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