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Modern communication mean no longer need to write a letter..

Modern communication mean no longer need to write a letter. . gY0PL
It is irrefutable that today's world is called as "world of technology" And this modern era brought varieties of communication modes. Nowadays it is quite unusual to communicate through letter writing. However, I certainly disagree with the given notion and believe to have letter writing for communication. Admittedly, the today's society is very modern in each aspects of life and they want to utilize the latest communication system such as cel phone, e -mail and social medias and so on. They have some reasons to do so. First, these up to minute commute devices works very speedily- at a blink of an eye. For particular, mobile provides instant talk with our love ones who stayed at overseas. Second, the gadgets offers both audio and video facilities that enables us to listen and see receivers. On the other hand, though the modern communication have dominant effects on society also, there is a place for notes writing. To begin with, it improves our writing skill. One should learn different vocabularies to write a letter. Furthermore, official documents needs to be write on paper. Moreover, writing a letter for someone makes them happy as they feel especial and hence, it forms firms bonding among the people. To conclude, although the modern devices are fastest and allows audiovisual services, letter should not underestimated for the benefits it offers. I think modern communication as well as letter should be used in our routine life.
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today
's world
is called
as
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world of technology
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modern
era brought varieties of
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communication
modes. Nowadays it is quite unusual to communicate through
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letter
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writing
.
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, I
certainly
disagree with the
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given
notion and believe to have
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letter
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writing
for
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communication
.
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, the
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today
's society is
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very
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modern
in each
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aspects
of
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life and
they want to utilize the latest
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communication
system such as
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cel
phone, e -mail and social medias and
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so
on. They have
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some
reasons to do
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.
First
, these up to minute commute devices works
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very
speedily
- at a blink of an eye. For particular, mobile provides instant talk with our
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love ones
who stayed at overseas. Second, the gadgets offers both audio and video facilities that enables us to listen and
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see
receivers.
On the other hand
, though the
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modern
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communication
have dominant effects on society
also
, there is a place for notes
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writing
. To
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begin
with, it
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improves
our
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writing
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skill
. One should learn
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different
vocabularies to write a
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letter
.
Furthermore
, official documents needs to be
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write
on paper.
Moreover
,
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writing
a
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letter
for someone
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makes
them happy as they feel especial and
hence
, it forms firms bonding among the
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people
.
To conclude
, although the
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modern
devices are fastest and
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allows
audiovisual services,
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letter
should not
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underestimated
for the benefits it offers. I
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think
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modern
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communication
as well
as
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letter
should be
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used
in our routine life.
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IELTS letter Modern communication mean no longer need to write a letter. .

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
239 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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