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You attended an interview two weeks ago, and you have not gotten a response from the company. Write a letter to the HR Manager.

You attended an interview two weeks ago, and you have not gotten a response from the company. Write a letter to the HR Manager. LBMN3
Dear HR Manager, I am writing you with regard to a recent interview I attended last two weeks for the position of Logistics Officer-NOB with your company. Although the panel of interviewers told me I would receive feedback within a week, I have not received any. Having advertised for the position, with ‘Fleet Management’ as a core requirement. I came to the interview after obtaining a certification in Fleet Operations and Management which I believe is an added advantage. Besides the certification, the interview, in my opinion, was great as most of the technical questions came from Fleet Management which I answered to the best of my knowledge. My certification, coined with my experience made my performance exceptional. I would appreciate it if I get a response from your company as I traveled from Kingstown, which, as you know, is a little north of a 1000km from the interview location in your head office. Moreover, the accommodation here is quite expensive and my resources are limited. I hope my request is given a special consideration. Yours faithfully, Bashir Mohammed Adam
Dear HR Manager,

I am writing you with regard to a recent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
I attended last two weeks for the position of Logistics Officer-NOB with your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. Although the panel of interviewers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me I would receive feedback within a week, I have not received any.

Having advertised for the position, with ‘Fleet Management’ as a core requirement. I came to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
after obtaining a certification in Fleet Operations and Management which I believe is an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
advantage.
Besides
the certification, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
, in my opinion, was great as most of the technical questions came from Fleet Management which I answered to the best of my knowledge. My certification, coined with my experience made my performance exceptional.

I would appreciate it if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a response from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as I traveled from Kingstown, which, as you know, is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
north of a
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "1000 km"
1000km
from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
location in your head office.
Moreover
, the accommodation here is quite expensive and my resources
are limited
. I hope my request is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
a special consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Bashir
Mohammed Adam
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IELTS letter You attended an interview two weeks ago, and you have not gotten a response from the company. Write a letter to the HR Manager.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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