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A letter from Sam, your English speaking friend talking about how the places we live in change

A letter from Sam, your English speaking friend talking about how the places we live in change Bl2BX
Dear Sam: It has been such a long time since the last time you write a letter, I wait for you and your family are being fine. Furthermore, I'm so glad that you asked me to help you with your assignment. Firstly, you want to know about my neighbourhood. A decade ago, people were more sociable with each other, you know really well what happens in the life of your neighbours but now people prefer to keep their lives in private and sometimes you have luck if someone say you hi or keep the door until you come. Secondly, I think this change could be great but if we don't forget that we should have some manners and not being rude with the others. In a few words, changes are a great way to involve but if we do that and not the opposite. Finally, I wish I would know about you soon. Love and kisses, Bea
Dear Sam: It has been such a long time since the last time you write a letter, I wait for you and your family are being fine.
Furthermore
, I'm
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so
glad that you asked me to
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help
you with your assignment.

Firstly
, you want to know about my
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neighbourhood
. A decade ago,
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people
were more sociable with each other, you know
really
well what happens in the life of your
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neighbours
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but
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now
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people
prefer to
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keep
their
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lives
in private and
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sometimes
you have luck if someone say you hi or
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keep
the door until you
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come
.

Secondly
, I
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think
this
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change
could be great
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
if we don't forget that we should have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
manners and not being rude with the others. In a few words,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
are a great way to involve
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
if we do that and not the opposite.

Finally
, I wish I would know about you
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soon
.

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Love
and kisses,
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Bea
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IELTS letter A letter from Sam, your English speaking friend talking about how the places we live in change

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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