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New construction plan at public park

New construction plan at public park EMjL

Dear Sir or Madam, I is Mohammad khatib, one of the fans of your newspaper. I am writing this letter to you to let you know of some, I hope, rumours I have heard recently about construction plans in our popular public place. As you know, this is the only park within our immediate vicinity, and many people go there fir refreshment and relaxing. So many children also play in this park with their peers. I have recently heard from some of my neighbors that Royal construction company intends to build some apt blocks in the park. At first I did not take it serious until yesterday that some engineers measuring and calculating different dimensions of the park. We all like our local park including its beautiful fountain its playground ans amusing facilities for children. So, I, as the representative of most of the neighbors have collected signatures against this project. Therefore, we, as local neighbors, disagree with the plan and ask you to please kindly write an article about the disadvantages of this action and express our great disapproval of the plan. We are looking forward to seeing your article as our voice soon. Thanks from your cooperation in advance. Your faithfully, Mohammad khatib

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