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You left your bag in an aero plane. Write a letter to airlines about the same.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I had taken a flight to London from New York having flight number XYZ78 with your airlines last week. Unfortunately due to the flight being delayed during the landing time, I had to rush for a meeting. Due to all of this rush I forgot and left my bag in the aircraft. I realised this when I reached my hotel. The bag I forgot was a black colour laptop bag. It was about 20 inches by 10 inches in lenght. The bag had two zipped pockets in fornt side and was of Samsonite brand. It contained my work laptop, laptop charger, office dairy and pen. I would like you to check with the aircraft crew and security personal and find the bag as it has some of my important documents. Also, let me know how and when can I come and collect it from you. Regards, Tarun S xxxxxx-xxx-xx
Dear Sir or Madam,

I had taken a flight to London from New York having flight number XYZ78 with your airlines last week. Unfortunately due to the flight
being delayed
during the landing time, I had to rush for a meeting. Due to all of this rush I forgot and
left
my
bag
in the aircraft. I
realised
this when I reached my hotel.

The
bag
I forgot was a black
colour
laptop
bag
. It was about
20 inches
by
10 inches
in
lenght
. The
bag
had two zipped pockets in
fornt
side and was of Samsonite brand. It contained my work laptop, laptop charger, office dairy and pen.

I would like you to
check
with the aircraft crew and security personal and find the
bag
as it has
some
of my
important
documents.
Also
,
let
me know how and when can I
come
and collect it from you.

Regards,

Tarun
S

xxxxxx-xxx-xx
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IELTS letter You left your bag in an aero plane. Write a letter to airlines about the same.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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