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my informal letter to my friend about summer holiday's plans

my informal letter to my friend about summer holiday's plans Vl177
Hello James, Numerous thanks for your letter. I do hope this letter will find you in good health and spirits. It is great to hear from you about changes in your life, although, sorry it has taken me so long to write back, hence I was too busy with me education. Owing to the fact that, we are preparing for the exam extremely hard. I am actually glad to read about your visit to my countryside during the summer holiday. Moreover, I promise you to spend time on entertaining activities such as showing my library which includes scientific and literal books. If you are keen on evaluating books as me, I hope we shall be never bored. In a light of the fact that, we will not have time to feel bored. Spending my summer holiday with you is one of my dreams, in addition, my dreams are coming true. Look after yourself until waited day. Your friend, Lucy.
Hello James,

Numerous thanks for your letter. I do hope this letter will find you in
good
health and spirits. It is great to hear from you about
changes
in your life, although, sorry it has taken me
so
long to write back,
hence
I was too busy
with me
education. Owing to the fact that, we are preparing for the exam
extremely
hard
. I am actually glad to read about your visit to my countryside during the summer holiday.
Moreover
, I promise you to spend time on entertaining activities such as showing my library which includes scientific and literal books. If you are keen on evaluating books as me, I hope we shall be never bored. In a light of the fact that, we will not have time to feel bored. Spending my summer holiday with you is one of my dreams,
in addition
, my dreams are coming true. Look after yourself until waited day.

Your friend,

Lucy.
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IELTS letter my informal letter to my friend about summer holiday's plans

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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