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My holiday in desert of Lout

My holiday in desert of Lout ndM1e

Hi Hannah, I went to Lout desert for my holiday- it was great! Normally, I am not going to hot places because I can't stand the hot weather. At the moment, it's the opposite and it is quite cold here. On the first day, I visited the village near the desert. The village was full of houses with traditional designs. For lunch, I tried local food which was a traditional meal of soup, vegetables, and meat. It was delicious. On the second day, I went to the desert with a guide and we stayed there all night. I wish you were here. The night of the desert is awesome. You can see stars in a crystal clear sky without the light pollution of the cities. I took lots of photos of the stars and the milky way. What did you do on holiday? Where did you go? Sincerely, K

Hi Hannah,

I went to Lout You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlonelydesolateuninhabitedarid
desert
 for my holiday- it was great!

Normally
, I am not going to hot places This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I can't stand the hot weather. At the moment, it's the opposite and it is quite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 here. On the first
 day, I visited the village near the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlonelydesolateuninhabitedarid
desert
. The village was full of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 with traditional designs. For lunch, I tried local food which was a traditional meal of soup, vegetables, and meat. It was delicious. On the second day, I went to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlonelydesolateuninhabitedarid
desert
 with a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).guide, and
guide and
 we stayed there all night. I wish you were here. The night of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlonelydesolateuninhabitedarid
desert
 is awesome. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 stars in a crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 sky without the light pollution of the cities. I took lots of photos of the stars and the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Milky Way
milky way
.

What did you do on holiday? Where did you go?

Sincerely
,

K