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Why want i live in england

Why want i live in england wBdql
Hi my name is berkay i am coming from turkey i want to live in england so please accept me if i go the UK it will be good for me you know good life statements good life conditions i want to buy a car for my one salary yeah so let me in im still writing it is top hard how many words should i use in this essay man come on i write a lot of words anyway if you dont accept me i will be upset by the way i love england yeah i think there is a good place to live to a vacation etc maybe the weather is usually cloudy in there but it is okey for me
Hi my name is
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berkay
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i
am coming from
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turkey
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i
want to
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live
in
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england
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so
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please
accept me if
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i
go the UK it will be
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good
for me you know
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good
life statements
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good
life conditions
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i
want to
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buy
a car for my one salary yeah
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so
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let
me in
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im
still
writing it is top
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hard
how
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many
words should
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i
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use
in this essay
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man
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come
on
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i
write
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a lot of
words anyway if you
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dont
accept me
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i
will
be upset
by the way
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i
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love
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england
yeah
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i
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think
there is a
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good
place to
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live
to a vacation etc maybe the weather is
usually
cloudy in there
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but
it is
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okey
for me
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IELTS letter Why want i live in england

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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