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Write an email to one of the customers. Invited him or her to dinner and give details of the restaurant

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Dear Takashi, I would like to invite you for a meal on … in the Happy Lobster restaurant. It’s a top-class food with varied fish and seafood dishes. It has prawns, crab and oysters. This restaurant famous for its giant crab with spring onions. In menu also has vegetarian dishes, a few beef and pork dises and diliciuos desserts. It’s very suitable for your taste. People who eaten in this restaurant say The Happy Lobster is a quiet restaurants with atmosphere. Moreover, it is located on the shore with a wonderful view of the bay and city at night. In addition, classical music playing all the time. Average cost of this restaurant is $120 per person. Howerer, it is 2 miles from city center. You have to go restaurant by boat about half an hour and 20 minutes by car. Maybe you get tired and exhasted. I hope you can come. Regards, Ren Le Thi Phan Ren
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Takashi
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I would like to invite you for a meal on … in the Happy Lobster restaurant.

It’s a top-
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food with varied fish and seafood dishes. It has prawns, crab and oysters. This
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restaurant
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famous
for its giant crab with spring onions. In menu
also
has vegetarian dishes, a
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few beef
and pork
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dises
and
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diliciuos
desserts. It’s
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very
suitable for your taste.

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People
who eaten in this
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restaurant
say The Happy Lobster is a quiet
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restaurants
with atmosphere.
Moreover
, it
is located
on the shore with a wonderful view of the bay and city at night.
In addition
, classical music playing all the time. Average cost of this
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restaurant
is $120 per person.

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, it is
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2 miles
from city center. You
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have to
go
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restaurant
by boat about half an hour and 20 minutes by car. Maybe you
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get
tired and
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exhasted
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I hope you can
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come
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Regards,

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Ren


Le
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Phan
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Ren
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IELTS letter Write an email to one of the customers. Invited him or her to dinner and give details of the restaurant

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8 paragraphs
156 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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