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museum voluntary work 1. where u saw 2. why 3. what you do

museum voluntary work 1. where u saw 2. why 3. what you do b30KQ
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to show an interest in applying for the part-time voluntary job position at the museum which I learnt about from the local newspaper. I want to do this job because, it will bestow me with a best opportunity to learn about the art and history of my country. After all, museum is a place where most valuable items of art, artifacts are displayed which are from an era, that is almost forgotten. Besides, it would also be a perfect opportunity for the community involvement. Coming to my skills and qualifications, I have good communication skills and an easy going personality. I get along easily with the visitors as, I have a previously worked as a receptionist consequently, know one or 2 dealings with different kinds of people. Based on my enthusiasm, skills and qualifications, I will definitely render great service at the museum. I will be available from 3 to 6 till the closing time. I hope you could spare some of your valuable time to discuss further regarding my candidacy.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
show
an interest in applying for the part-time voluntary job position at the museum which I
learnt
about from the local newspaper.

I want to do this job
because
, it will bestow me with
a
best opportunity to learn about the art and history of my country.
After all
, museum is a place where most valuable items of art, artifacts
are displayed
which are from an era,
that is
almost forgotten.
Besides
, it would
also
be a perfect opportunity for the community involvement.

Coming to my
skills
and qualifications, I have
good
communication
skills
and an easy going personality. I
get
along
easily
with the visitors as, I have a previously worked as a receptionist
consequently
, know one or 2 dealings with
different
kinds of
people
.

Based on my enthusiasm,
skills
and qualifications, I will definitely render great service at the museum. I will be available from 3 to 6 till the closing time. I hope you could spare
some
of your valuable time to discuss
further
regarding my candidacy.
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IELTS letter museum voluntary work 1. where u saw 2. why 3. what you do

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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