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letter to internet provider

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my discontent with the quality of the internet connection that your company provides in our area. The unreliable internet connection is causing a great problem for us, and I am hoping you would resolve it as soon as possible. Your company is supposed to provide us with consistent and strong internet connection. However, this does not seem to be the case. For the last couple of weeks, we are experiencing extremely slow connectivity and sometimes the internet is totally unreachable. During peak hours, the internet speed is as slow as a few KB per second only. a number of people in our area, work from home because of pandemic, and a disruptive internet connection means they are unable to work. Due to poor connectivity, they can’t send finished assignments to their clients on time. Frequent disconnections also affect people who do video conferencing online. I expected that the situation will be dealt with as soon as possible. Please send your staff to come over and check if you need to install new cables since they might be damaged by the last months snowstorm. I hope you will take any other measure necessary to resolve the slow connectivity. Expecting a fast resolution to our problems. Yours truly,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my discontent with the quality of the internet
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connection
that your
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company
provides in our area. The unreliable internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
connection
is causing a great problem for us, and I am hoping you would resolve it as
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soon
as possible.

Your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is supposed
to provide us with consistent and strong internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
connection
.
However
, this does not seem to be the case. For the last couple of weeks, we are experiencing
extremely
slow connectivity and
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sometimes
the internet is
totally
unreachable. During peak hours, the internet speed is as slow as a few KB per second
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only
.

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a
number of
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people
in our area, work from home
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because
of pandemic, and a disruptive internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
connection
means they are unable to work. Due to poor connectivity, they can’t
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send
finished assignments to their clients on time. Frequent disconnections
also
affect
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people
who do video conferencing online.

I
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expected
that the situation will
be dealt
with as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.
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Please
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send
your staff to
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come
over and
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check
if you need to install new cables since they might
be damaged
by the last
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months
snowstorm. I hope you will take any other measure necessary to resolve the slow connectivity.

Expecting a
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fast
resolution to our problems.

Yours
truly
,
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IELTS letter letter to internet provider

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
215 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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