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letter to complain about the restaurants food

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Dear Sir / Madam, I visited your restaurants more offenly as its extremely near to my home and my sisters likes north indian dishes which is extremely famous in your restaurant. but this time its disappointment us by serving bad food and unexpected behavior from the suplayer. Which i need to bring to your notice. I was there with my family to celebrate my husband's birthday on dec2nd. we have pre ordered cake of orange flaver. but the served cake taste like black forest. that ruined our spirit of celebration. i have booked the tables oneday before and had orderd the cake, i informed to the order taking guys in telephone that customization on cakes. but there is nothing is proper in the cake they served and he did a spelling mistake while writing the name of my husband on the cake I hope you can imagine our disappointment when the served kulcha's are all burnt and ghee rice has some plesent smell. hoping that you will take necessary steps regarding this complaint. otherwise you already lost the customers. Your faithfully Chaitra
Dear Sir / Madam,

I visited your restaurants more
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offenly
as
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its
extremely
near to my home and my sisters likes north
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indian
dishes which is
extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
in your restaurant.

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but
this time its disappointment us by serving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
food and unexpected behavior from the
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suplayer
.
“Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
need to bring to your notice.

I was there with my family to celebrate my husband's birthday on dec2nd.
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we
have
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pre
ordered
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cake
of orange
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flaver
.

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but
the served
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cake
taste like black forest.
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that
ruined our spirit of celebration.

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i
have booked the tables
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oneday
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before
and had
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orderd
the
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cake
,
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i
informed to the order taking guys in telephone

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that
customization on
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cakes
.
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but
there is nothing is proper in the
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cake
they
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served and
he did a spelling mistake while writing the name of my husband on the
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cake


I hope you can imagine our disappointment when the served
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kulcha
's are all burnt and ghee rice has
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some
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plesent
smell.

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hoping
that you will take necessary steps regarding this complaint.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
otherwise
you already lost the customers.

Your
faithfully


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Chaitra
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IELTS letter letter to complain about the restaurants food

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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