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Write an email to a friend telling them about a recent holiday

Write an email to a friend telling them about a recent holiday N3OLN
Hi Jimin, How are things? Are you looking forward to the spring holiday? I think you got an enjoyable spring holiday. I’m writing to you because I want to tell you about my spring holiday. Last spring, my family spent a week of the spring in Dalat, and it was the best spring week I have ever had. We arrived at Dalat in the late afternoon. I was totally impressed by the sunset of Dalat. Watching the sun gradually going down from one side of the Ho Xuan Huong lake was breathtaking. At night, we ate beef hotpot which was a specialty here. It was so tasty and the price was also much cheaper than where I live. After that, my family visited the Night Market to eat various foods and fruits. I had a chance to taste “Banh trang nuong” and it was awesome, a perfect food for a cool night. On the next few days, we visited different tourist attractions such as the Love Valley, the Pongour waterfall, … There were many tourists also coming there. I hope to have a chance to return to this beautiful city sone day. Write to me and tell me what you did during your holiday. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Dieu
Hi Jimin,

How are things? Are you looking forward to the spring holiday? I
think
you
got
an enjoyable spring holiday. I’m writing to you
because
I want to
tell
you about my spring holiday.

Last spring, my family spent a week of the spring in
Dalat
, and it was the best spring week I have ever had. We arrived at
Dalat
in the late afternoon. I was
totally
impressed by the sunset of
Dalat
. Watching the sun
gradually
going down from one side of the Ho
Xuan
Huong
lake was breathtaking. At night, we ate beef hotpot which was a specialty here. It was
so
tasty and the price was
also
much cheaper than where I
live
. After that, my family visited the Night Market to eat various foods and fruits. I had a chance to taste “
Banh
trang
nuong
” and it was awesome, a perfect food for a cool night. On the
next
few days, we visited
different
tourist attractions such as the
Love
Valley, the
Pongour
waterfall, … There were
many
tourists
also
coming there. I hope to have a chance to return to this
beautiful
city
sone
day.

Write to me and
tell
me what you did during your holiday.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Dieu
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